Playback speed×Share postShare post at current timeShare from 0:000:00/0:00Chasing an Opening Scene With Impact Marlon J. GreenMar 30, 2026ShareIn this episode, I rewrite the opening scene of an action screenplay in real time and talk through what works, what doesn’t, and why.If you’re interested in screenwriting, storytelling, or how writing actually evolves on the page, this is for you.Watch Full Episode HereStoryRay is a reader-supported publication. To receive new posts and support my work, consider becoming a FREE or paid subscriber.SubscribeDiscussion about this videoCommentsRestacksStoryRaySubscribeAuthorsMarlon J. GreenRecent PostsWhy Some Movies Feel Like "Streaming Movies"Mar 11 • Marlon J. GreenWhy The Order of Description Matters in WritingMar 4 • Marlon J. GreenWhat Is A High Concept Idea?Jan 27 • Marlon J. GreenAttract Partners When You're SingleJan 21 • Marlon J. GreenYour Story Needs More ConflictJan 8 • Marlon J. GreenAre Your Story's Characters Believable?Dec 24, 2025 • Marlon J. GreenDo Screenwriters Need 'Personal-Connection' with Stories they Write?Dec 9, 2025 • Marlon J. Green